Hello
I've just looked at your rough cut and wanted to make a couple of comments (before I forget!).
1. The fast-forward sequence would look better in slow motion - it looks a bit comical as it is.
2. I'm not sure that the rabbit fits in - it's quite a strange shot to have in the video now, given that it doesn't feature at any other point (nor do any other animals apart from the bird which is different)
3. I really feel that the final shots should be of your artist, rather than the dancers.... you should be leaving images of the new artist in the minds of the audience rather than some random dancers.
We can chat this over in class tomorrow.
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